Even fantasy has to be historically accurate – Guest Post – Annamaria Bazzi

By Carol / March 31, 2013 /

WhiteSwansARegencyEra for blogsI want to thank Carol for hosting the tenth stop on my blog tour for the young adult fantasy short story series White Swans: A Regency Era. It’s great to be here, Carol. It’s been quite a different experience scheduling my own blog tour, and not always as fun as doing the research and writing for my book!

The research I did for the first short story of the White Swans series was both interesting and fun. Historical facts are important no matter what genre an author writes, but especially writing for young adults, since teens are impressionable and tend to believe everything they read. Even the accuracy of the details of clothing, which might seem trivial, is essential.

The Regency Era has intrigued me since I was a child, but even more so after reading Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen. For many of my facts, I turned to the Jane Austen websites, which are full of wonderful historic details.

One of the more challenging items I researched was how to address people. I had been under the impression that I could refer to a duke as ‘My Lord.’ Boy was I wrong! To do so is quite degrading. A duke is addressed as ‘Your Grace’, and he’s introduced as, for example, ‘Charles Emory, the Duke of Deverow.’ Yes, he is one of the leading characters in my book.

What about the funny little hat maids wore that looked like a shower cap? Well, that’s called a mob hat, and no, it has nothing to do with mobsters and gangsters. It was an essential part of a maid’s uniform.

Speaking of servants, I had to understand what a footman does versus a butler. A footman did a variety of indoor and outdoor jobs. Important to me were the indoor jobs. Learning that a footman laid out the table, served the meal and tea, and assisted the butler helped me determine what Wordsworth’s duties had to be in the book.

During this research, I learned that the butler was responsible for household security and most important, the wine cellar. The butler didn’t wear a uniform, but he wore a black cravat instead of a white one so he would not be mistaken for a gentleman.

I also needed to know the difference between a chambermaid, parlor maid, a personal maid, and a lady in waiting. The housekeeper supervised all the maids including the cook, ordered food and supplies, and took care of the household accounts. She pretty much ran the house. I chose not to give my character Lady Kendíka a lady in waiting. Instead, I gave her a companion, whose duties I describe in the second book.

Another very important servant was the personal maid or “abigail.” A personal maid took care of all the lady’s needs. In White Swans, Cordova is Lady Kendíka’s abigail, Cordova dresses and undresses Lady Kendíka, helps with her hair and also mends and takes care of all her dresses.

Finding out about men’s wear was interesting. I always wondered about the cravat, also called a neckcloth. Worn with high-collared shirts, a cravat is a long, narrow strip of linen or silk wrapped around the neck several times and tied in the front.

Behavior and manners are also important. My character Charles has exemplary manners. While his etiquette is excellent, Kendíka, who is new to the world and comes from the 21st century, has much to learn.

It is my firm belief an author should use the facts of history correctly to leave the proper impressions with the reader, especially when dealing with impressionable teens.

White Swans: A Regency Era

Left an orphan, Kendíka cries herself to sleep and startles awake in a Regency castle. Terror consumes her, and she attempts to escape only to discover the new world is her prison. Having no choice, she attends a ball given by her guardian, Lord Deverow, to introduce her into society. He admonishes her to follow the rules and promises to protect her from the wrath of the strange, hazy set of eyes spying on everything. But when she ignores his warning, Kendíka learns firsthand what it means to be disobedient.

Annamaria Bazzi

Although born in the United States, Annamaria Bazzi spent a great deal of her childhood in Sicily, Italy, in a town called Sciacca. Italian was the language spoken at home. Therefore, she had no problems when she found herself growing up in a strange country. Upon returning to the states, she promised herself she would speak without an accent.

She attended Wayne State University in Detroit Michigan, where she obtained her Bachelor of Science in Computers with a minor in Spanish.

Annamaria spent twenty years programming systems for large corporations, creating innovative solution, and addressing customer problems. During those years, she raised four daughters and one husband. Annamaria lives in Richmond Virginia with her small family where she now dedicates a good part of her day writing.

You can visit Annamaria at:


Links to Annamaria’s books
White Swans: A Regency Era — Amazon
A Simple Matter of Justice — Amazon, Barnes & Noble, Smashwords
Revelation of AbaddonAmazon, Barnes & Noble, Smashwords 

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  1. annamaria on March 31, 2013 at 4:02 pm

    carol, thank you for the opportunity to share my views on historical correctness with your readers. it was a pleasure working with you and look forward to doing it again.

    • Carol Bodensteiner on March 31, 2013 at 6:39 pm

      I’m delighted to host one stop on your blog tour, Annamaria. I hope White Swans: A Regency Era achieves great success.

  2. Sharon Lippincott on April 1, 2013 at 9:49 am

    What a fascinating post, and entirely relevant for reasons other than writing. I watched Downton Abby for the first time this year and was flummoxed by the huge staff. I had not taken time to research the various positions, and voila! Answers appeared.

    I so appreciate well-researched novels, whether historical or contemporary. My husband and I spend a lot of time on road trips and usually have an audiobook playing. He’s a stickler for detail and some authors have him growling quite often when they are incorrect on subjects he’s knowledgeable about or trip themselves up with internal inconsistencies. Fortunately for those authors, he never writes reviews.

    • Carol Bodensteiner on April 1, 2013 at 9:57 am

      Good point, Sharon. Historical or contemporary, authors need to get the details right. Errors take readers out of the story and make them question everything. Some of the details Annamaria found were simply interesting – like the mob hats – and others were critical to accurate action – like the butler vs footman responsibilities. It all goes to credibility. Thanks for commenting.

  3. annamaria on April 2, 2013 at 7:04 am

    sharon, historical accuracy is a must when dealing with ya fiction. youngsters are so impressionable and they tend to believe everything they read. it’s important to me to leave them with true knowledge. thank you for your obervations.

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