How do you write words that sing?

By Carol / November 27, 2012 /

Really good authors make me see the places, feel the emotions, understand and relate to the challenges the characters face. Good authors make me care, whether the time is 300 years ago or 3,000 years in the future. Or today. I remember the writing of the best authors, and I keep their books on my shelves because they inspire me to be a better writer myself.

When I went in a new direction with my life, turning away from the familiar world of business writing and venturing into uncharted territory of creative writing, I needed new guides, experienced trekkers who knew the tools and how to use them to reach the desired destination. I couldn’t have been luckier than to have one of my first guides be Mary Ylvisaker Nilsen, a skilled writer in her own right and a wise teacher willing to share all she knew about the art and craft of writing.

I participated in many of Nilsen’s workshops, soaking up as much as I could, amazed that as an English major myself, I knew so little about how to use language to create the prose I loved so much in other writers. Nilsen’s workshops improved my writing immeasurably. My problem was that even though I listened as attentively in class as I could, even though I applied myself to every assignment, even though I put what I learned into practice, even then – even then – I’m sure I forgot more than half of what she taught me. I always wished I could take all the classes again.

Imagine my delight when Nilsen brought many of the elements of her workshops together in a book, Words that Sing – Composing Lyrical Prose. In this book, Nilsen explains the various types of sentence structures, including balanced, series, cumulative, and suspensions, offering numerous examples of each form and then challenging readers to try their hand at writing in these styles. She works through various forms of metaphors, demonstrating how a well chosen metaphor can strengthen writing, again providing examples and encouraging readers to write their own.

Words that Sing as a personal tutorial or a reference volume. It could also be used as a workshop by groups of writers.  Nilsen wrote the book for religious professionals, based on courses she’s taught for years, but the principles and strategies she shares are relevant to any writer who values and wants to improve the quality of her/his writing. In writing this book, Nilsen practices what she preaches. Her writing is lyrical, her book an inspiration. This is a book for any writer who wants the words they write to sing.

If you want to give yourself or someone else who loves to write a gift, you couldn’t do better than Mary Ylvisaker Nilsen’s Words that Sing.

Words that Sing is available from Amazon or from Zion Publishing.

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  1. Paulette Mahurin on November 27, 2012 at 3:35 pm

    Very nice!

    • Carol Bodensteiner on November 27, 2012 at 3:43 pm

      Thanks. Mary has inspired my writing time and again. It’s great to be able to pull this book off the shelf whenever I need a reminder.

  2. Mary Gottschalk on November 27, 2012 at 7:44 pm

    Carol .. a lovely review … like you, I have so much admiration for Mary’s insights and teaching skills. Thanks for letting us know about her newest gift to writers.

    • Carol Bodensteiner on November 28, 2012 at 8:22 am

      Thanks, Mary. Mary Nilsen’s book is a treasure and I’m delighted to let other writers know about it.

  3. Maryellen Knowles on November 28, 2012 at 9:09 am

    Thank you, Carol, for highlighting the work of a gifted writer, Mary Ylvisaker Nilsen. Mary has given her life sharing her gifts and encouraging others to write with ‘words that sing.’ I have shared her book with other aspiring writers.

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